Questioning a Moment
Can you see me there?
I was there just a moment ago,
Maybe I’m still there,
Among those lines that were with me,
And probably were a part of me.
I can see someone here,
I feel something now,
Is it you?
Are you trying to tell me your story?
Or is it my story?
Can you see me rising?
Or am I falling?
Will you tell me where I’m going?
Is this your home?
How long will you stay?
Can I…. do I stay with you?
Do we even stay?
Aren’t we moving?
Were we ever still?
Are we in harmony?
Or is it harmonious discord
Holding us together?
You just passed me….
Did you see me?
5 comments:
Dear Neha
this is yet another start to one more of ur seemingly endless talents. keep up the good work. Chk out my blog smtime n gimme sm feedback - both negativ n positive
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Hey Neha,
This is totally awesome, Some or is it?
Suddenly i feel like questioning evething i hear or read. :) anyways great work.
Keep it up. Now onto your next blog
Cheers
Vishal
a tremendous piece where you were successful in appeal to the senses which is one of the most essential traits of an aesthetic writer.
a tremendous piece where you were successful in appeal to the senses which is one of the most essential traits of an aesthetic writer.
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hi neha...
beutiful piece..does it matter what we were, do we care?? r v in harmony...thought provoking... keep it up dear.. :)
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